Deltora - The Forbidden Forest

I've been working on this one for several weeks now, it's for this scholarship I'm hoping to get so I can go back to Boston. Theres still a lot of touching up that I'm going to do, but I thought I'd post something up. It's part of these series that I read a while back, it's called Deltora quest, it's meant for younger kids, but I ran out of reading material and I was desperate. Yes I am a dork. I could use as much criticism as possible, I really have to win. Full view for a better look, and please comment, I need the criticism